2013 (Doomsday)

This BL story is really good! The characters are well-written, and the chemistry between them is undeniable. The pacing keeps me engaged, and the emotions feel so real. I love how the story unfolds, but I NEED an update soon! The anticipation is killing me. Can’t wait to see what happens next!

the novel is good but it just too slow and the mc is kind of weak with is kind cheat     what i mean is that the mc have and op cheat but is main strength is too weak can't even fight above realm

Her about the rings…

Go for it

-10 HP

It’s ok but it really could have been a lot better. Even the description doesn’t make any sense, while the quality may be good everything else is pretty bad.

Have any of you ever read a book that breathes? One that jus took seemed realistic enough to take a life on its own? Because this is one of them. I am not saying this as an exaggeration. I mean it as it stands, as I find this book incredible and much more deserving of views.Let me preface this by saying, I did not play the original game it was ‘based’ on. I also use the word based loosely, just as this book takes a story on its own, and there was no need for any backgrounds info or experience from the original source, and I was immersed by the time I was at Ch 12-13.Now, the grammar is great. Indisputably so. It is a sight for sore eyes on this  side laden with bad syntax. As for the characters, I do love a Main who is willing to be ruthless when it counts. We all know that’s a ***** hero isn’t interestingly anymore, but I have read many originals which try to skew as far away as possible, turning our Main into a hateful massmurderer, which in my opinion is worse. This book finds an acceptable (even interesting and innovative, I think) middle ground between altruistic superman and homicidal maniac.For the world building, I quite honestly don’t know which is original and which has its origins in the game. So although lovely I will refrain from any comments. But what I can judge is the interactions between the characters in the world, there conversations, attitudes, relationships, and I can say that I feel submerged in a world that is not earth.What I do struggle with, but that is really small, is the writing style as sometimes I find the same words repeated over in a narrative passage (a personal ire taught to me since elementary school). But let us be real, it would not be a problem in the myriad of different, much worse, originals, so it won’t be one for me here either. You know what the say, when everything’s perfect, the mistakes just turn more glaring, and what would never ge an issue in mediocrity can be in great works. So I will leave my review at 5 stars. No less, no more.I think this may have gotten me into si-fi ^^’

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